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my poem

2009-05-11 21:22:10 by cimbles

wrote this poem, when reading this, keep in mind that I am a girl.
it's called Someone Loves Him

here it is:

In a dark room,
Nothing around you,
All you can think is that someone,
Somewhere,
No matter their age,
Or gender,
Loves you,
A father,
A mother,
Or even a girl,
Someone out there,
Somewhere,
Loves you,
Me, I just like you...
A lot!


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groundpwndrgroundpwndr

2009-05-11 21:26:53

That was fucking shit. I know it is not original as I have seen that bullshit online before.
GTFO

cimbles responds:

FYI
I had no Idea that this existed!
It may be similar, but it's not the SAME!!!


linknzelda3linknzelda3

2009-05-11 22:36:45

not bad not bad :D

cimbles responds:

thank you!


OddlyPoeticOddlyPoetic

2009-05-12 23:09:45

Seen better...seen worse too...

cimbles responds:

i'm gonna take that as a complement!


sven647sven647

2009-05-13 00:44:42

Aren't you supposed to ryme even just a little bit

cimbles responds:

Poems don't have to rhyme.
they can,
but they don't have to.


WuggawootWuggawoot

2009-05-13 01:49:36

It feels more like a sentence than a poem.

cimbles responds:

then let's call it a poetic sentence!
lol