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my poem

Posted by cimbles - May 11th, 2009


wrote this poem, when reading this, keep in mind that I am a girl.
it's called Someone Loves Him

here it is:

In a dark room,
Nothing around you,
All you can think is that someone,
Somewhere,
No matter their age,
Or gender,
Loves you,
A father,
A mother,
Or even a girl,
Someone out there,
Somewhere,
Loves you,
Me, I just like you...
A lot!


Comments

not bad not bad :D

thank you!

Seen better...seen worse too...

i'm gonna take that as a complement!

Aren't you supposed to ryme even just a little bit

Poems don't have to rhyme.
they can,
but they don't have to.

It feels more like a sentence than a poem.

then let's call it a poetic sentence!
lol